All Comments on 'Maria the Wood Nymph'

excellent erotic story but with a lot of misspell Marie for Maria and

vice versa

nice scenerio. but I found it confusing to have the wife named Marie and the other woman named Maria. It made it more difficult to get into the feeling of the story.

Things like "Maria moved over Maria"

And who is Mare? How is MP?

Stumbling over the names, trying to figure out who is doing what, breaks the mood for an otherwise good story.

You never should have given them names so similar if you couldn't keep them straight.

The Maria/Marie gaff has been mentioned by several readers in their comments so no need to repeat here. Going beyond that I found the story very pedestrian. The plot and characters were cliched and dull and the dialogue unrealistic. The initial set up was okay but it needed alot more care and work to make it an erotic read and an engaging story. The run of the mill ending: 'Maria moved in with us shortly after that weekend, and we have been happy ever since.' pretty much sums it up.