All Comments on 'Locked in with a Succubus Ch. 03'

by manyeyedhydra

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
do tell more!

Finding myself quite intrigued so far as to how this will develop,I sense a similarity to interview with the vampire,which was also well told.

Until the next chapter in succubus summoning comes,I eagerly await the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good, if not feeling a bit rushed...

Like I said, it's good, but it does feel a little rushed (almost thrown together) when compared to most of your other works posted here. Still, it's lovely to see you posting here again--can't get enough succubii.

Also -not to nitpick- these chapters are much shorter than your usual fare.

Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good but too short

Very good yet it is too short - like reading 1 paragraph of a entire novel.

PsionVPsionVover 12 years ago
You are amazing

Manyeyedhydra, your succubus writing skills are right on my hot-spot, the more I read the more amazing the genre of succubus seems, if you ever need a quick editor don't hesitate to e-mail me, I'd enjoy the work ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
chapters

what's with the short 1 page chapters

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