by Cyanlot
Great writing. You addressed the confusing aspects of sex that go beyond the physical. Hope to see more like this. Thanks!
You really captured the emotions of submission very well. It reminded me so well of my first submission to my wifes lover, and I too became his bitch.
Please keep writing! Another story similar, or perhaps a sequel? Maybe he can try to get out of the arrangement and is blackmailed or something? Very sexy and great writing!
we are both married men but my lover takes me as his woman.beyond dressing for him i am now his bitch who needs him to take her nipple in his mouth and milk her.i open my asspussy for his cock and have come to realize i have a clittycock between my legs. we now realize that we prefer sex with each other rather than with our wives. and yes once your man starts coming on and in you you understand and accept your womanhood
Sounds like this guy's completely straight except for his relationship with Brad. There, he's not so much gay as just a female (for the time).
nice start, too bad you didn't feel the need to write more....i know i would have enjoyed it very much.......i had a situation similar to yours, except mine was work related......my immediate boss had read " the girl in me" and took advantage of a situation, at my expense, both physically and mostly emotionally.....i came to love him, but he considered himself straight, and me just a Tranny cock slut.
Love your writing style, so real & believable. You make it hot from the viewpoint of a submissive.
I loved it, but was hoping you would introduce the added humiliation of Brad topping him in front of Brad's wife, Rachel, and then his own wife. Because you're not a real bitch until everyone knows you're a bitch!
What a great story, I wish something like that happened to me when I was younger.
Holy hell! I say I don't like rape stories, but once I got past that ... I was just mesmerized with your narrator's description of his acquiescence and submission. I know how Brad's Bitch feels. Your writing owns me ...