All Comments on 'Hera's Curse Ch. 01'

Eather i am not awake yet or i got lost in there, was that abit conflicting or is it me?

This story seemed way too conflicting, didn't go into any detail what so ever. Started off with an explanation as to what was going on, then the writer seemingly forgot all about it and butchered the story.

Really want to see where you're going with this!

good idea but needs more work

It's hot! write more please!

That is how I felt, cock throbbing in hand, wishing it had been me instead you were deflowering... great story! Take me (us) to the next level... to what happens after 10:30 pm.

Tammy