All Comments on 'Fallen Girls and Holidays Ch. 02'

I'm a sucker for a college story, plus this is well written and a nicely paced one. I'm looking forward to more.

Interesting turn of events, a touch different than anticipated. Looking forward to the next posting.

what happened to make her uncomfortable around guys, and how bad the trauma might be, the two leads seem interesting, and i hope that it is a long reveal of the problem and solution, quick never seems correct

Love the slow build of their relationship. And yeah I am curious about what made Bree so uncomfortable around men. I am sure it is something bad that they will have to face together. Can't wait to read more!

You've got me curious. Good character development. Nice tension. Chapters are on the short side, but good start.