by alexcarr
I couldn't get past all the errors to finish the story. You need an editor.
A great story, or is it real. never mind the errors, it is what every 65 year old and over hopes for
Get an editor, or use the tools on your own computer.
While my wife's libido has waned in her sixties mine hasn't and I would like to find an eager woman my age. Your story idea was sound but an editor would have helped greated. Don't give up and I will look for future postings.
The idea for the story is good but PLEASE have somebody at least look it over.
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The concept of the story could be great, but the poor execution made it impossible to read. I agree with the others, get an editor, but at least you should have used spell check.
Sorry I rushed it without proper editing, I shall take extra care now I know there are you guys out there who like to read me.