All Comments on 'Between The Walls'

I love the story so far...five stars

Excellent start.

Five.

Great start cant wait to read the rest.

Okay not sure where this story is going but i plan to buckle up for the ride.

V3

For a newcomer on a sex based story site you've managed to create something entertaining w/o any mention of a sexual act- that's an achivement to be proud of. Keep it up- good writing is something to be enjoyed.

looks like johnny may have some competition.

reist of the story even comes close to fulfilling the expectations you've raised so far, you'll have created a super special treat for Literotica readers. Love your writing!

I sense a wonderful triangle coming on and someone's going to have to fight for what they want. I didn't expect a 3rd person to enter into the plan but, damn I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.

156 stars!

please go on!

A very nice start.. hope you'll post the next chapters VERY SOON!

pLS. don't keep us waiting. Thanks!

Great Start

Good!

i so hope you continue it i cant wait for more sooner than later please

***** and lip smackin' to boot!!!