All Comments on 'Surprise Package'

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johnnieblue44johnnieblue44almost 13 years ago
A masterpiece

Lucia and John make a compelling couple. There should definitely be a sequel, if not a series. You remain the sensational combination of intelligence and sluttiness, Lucia. Keep sucking!

Oral RexOral Rexalmost 13 years ago
Your writing has reached a new level

This story keeps the excitement building and renewing from beginning to end. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wow.

You are a man's dream come true. Nothing quite like a woman that knows how to please and take a cock.

pixandwordspixandwordsalmost 13 years ago
Absolutely superb story!

Wow. A stunning story, superbly written by an expert who obviously knows - and loves - her subject. Yes, it got my *5* vote but only because I couldn't vote *10*. More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Simply Outstanding!

Lucia, you have written an absolute gem of a cocksucking story. I gave it a vote of five and only wished I could have gone higher as well. Can't wait to see where an accomplished fellatrix of your high caliber goes from here! Thanks Lucia! RCG

NorthsiderNorthsideralmost 13 years ago
Awesome.

No fucking wonder you are my favorite author.............

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
HERE CUMS JUICY LUCY

will the apple have a worm for her. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Realy..???

You guys like it when your Hero eats a cream pie

left not only by himself but other guys also...

2275jr2275jrabout 12 years ago
taking one and all hard cock in all holes

surpries package was a real hot horny story .. written like the true brilliant writer you are.. love the story to bits . do keep them cumming

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

hot, total literotica package

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Awesome!!!

Loved every word of this story! Keep writing Lucia!!!

velcro_zippervelcro_zipperabout 5 years ago
Epic adventures

Every horny man appreciates an enthusiastic slut, and Lucia surely fits that bill!

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I am a Canadian woman with a passion for blowjobs. I love writing erotic fiction. My main area of interest is obviously fellatio, and I like to explore my submissive side. A common theme in my stories is a woman who is initially forced or coerced into sucking cock, but who fu...