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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Right.

I'd better re-read this another time, when I'm not tired, because it made no sense at all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Beyond Salvage

Numerous word omissions and no real ending

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
why

No idea of why

MasterBlogmanMasterBlogmanover 1 year ago

It made perfect sense to me. Ben is pissed with her for some unspecified reason and enlists Karen and so friends to set her up for a revenge rape before kicking her out. The sex isn't as vividly described as it could be, but then she doesn't get much pleasure out of being raped in every hole, so I guess there isn't much to describe in terms of the way she experiences it.

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