sweet memory and simple
I read this and reread this and still feel like I missed the boat. I understand that the simplicity of it reflects the tender nature of the subject, but I wish this didn't fit so nicely in the box.
although my feeling is somewhere between the two comments below. A5
This came over as prose with line breaks
The poem begins as prose then as it progresses becomes poetry, reflecting the progress of the narrator's affair with the tutor.
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