All Comments on 'Call Me Charlotte'

You need to write more of your mom and her magic fingers...

Good story a little short but good ...and pajamas is spelled with an A not a Y ...and what is rollicking? ...wouldn't it have sounded better, "He stared at her juicy wild breasts, rocking under her wet top."

Please write another chapter, with spontaneous sex whenever and wherever! Great storyline, lots of future possibilities.

"pyjamas" is the british spelling and is also correct. Try not to be such a twat.

You have a good start to the story keep it up. Will look forward to more about Charlotte and Daniel

It's a delightful old word meaning 'exuberantly lively and amusing'. It is used in perfect context, and the author's use of vocabulary is excellent.

Don't you have 'google' where you come from, or can't you spell it on your computer you idiot!! :)

Don't be such a twat by calling others a twat..... you twat.

Ok I stand corrected on the spelling of pyjamas....now as for rollicking heres the definition that google said and I took in to conceration it was a british use of the word, wigging (Brit. slang) so I made a mistake and for that I apolize ... now that is cleared up I hope there is many more chapters to this story

I really enjoyed the read. Other detractors below *are* twats for nit-picking. I loved this story.

A well written chapter with quite enough detail to entice us to want more. Believable hot incest story. Thanks

I wonder where they will go from here?

I would hope that it is just a start of their sexual relationship.

Thanks for the good read.

Please continue

Please, please continue! This is great for what I assume is your 1st story. Can't wait to read more now that they've lost their society-imposed inhibitions

I can't believe that "eviltw427" complained about the spelling in the story THEN spelled apologize in his complaint as "apolize". I really do not think this is proper spelling regardless of what country you are from. Someone else needs his text to be edited

@ eviltw427

What you mean to say is you "hope there *ARE* many more chapters to this story". Since 'chapterS' is plural, the word is not 'is' but 'are'.

For someone who doesn't know how to write you sure are anal about words in the story that aren't even WRONG to begin with.

This may be embarrassing to you, but maybe next time you'll think twice before bitching about a man's hard work.

Great story, well told, well written. I loved this story

Good story. Author has used the English language well. Gutter slang used only when and where appropriate. Asone who has no problem with mutual consensual incest, it is a shame that the mother has to be so drunk before she can love/have sex with her son. It appears that mother and son do not or can not communicate.with each other.

Nobody can cum over & over like that...Girls maybe....but NO guy can...