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A South African Lesbian Story

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by Anonymous06/09/11

Research please

I'm a South African man and as much as I enjoyed the story i kept getting dissapointed by the wrong facts you have here! I feel insulted that you think Johannesburg is the only developed city in South Africa when there are others like Cape Town, Pretoria and Durban, even those are not the only ones! I also don't appreciate you saying the lady was Zulu when she does't even have a Zulu name, Adewale is not a South African name! Dipolelo's last name was also wrongly spelt, it is supposed to be Mosotho...but your story is good none the less

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by Anonymous06/09/11

version 46 of the same tired crap

yet another cut & paste variation of the same 3 stories he has been posting since he started spamming this site

Literotica should have banned him and his racist spam when he posted his first story in here

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by Anonymous06/09/11

Am a South African and found this story hilarious...a zulu chick named Baatile? And the number of times you refer 2 the gal as S.African is ridiculouz 2...pshh author my ass...your horrible

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by Anonymous02/05/13

another South African

I know all this is supposed to be smut, fictitious and solely for the purpose of making dicks hard but I have to day, I'm quite disappointed in the way you portray our country. Not intentionally of course, it's ignorance and laziness. All you could have done is google some current event on SA to know that we are as modernized as Canada.
Anyway it's not even about that. It's lack of creativity on your part. I never read your stories, Mr.X. They lack substance and intellect. Even if you were to go by a different moniker, I'd tell one of your stories before I'm even through the fist paragraph. They make the reader feel dumb for even starting to read them.
Anyway, I believe everybody deserves a fighting chance so I'm gonna wait for a story from you that's, at least, inspired. Find a muse or something.

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by Anonymous03/11/13

WTF!!

Do some research PLEASE, we do not have any Baatile Adiwale in Zulu, your story was rushed, no character building its all over the show, I swear it felt like I was reading a newspaper about a BROTHEL in Jo'burg. You can do better if you try harder!!!

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by Anonymous02/15/14

PLEASE STOP WRITING. JUST STOP.

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by Anonymous05/10/14

You went full retard on this one

Honestly I gotta ask - do you enjoy offending people or are you just an idiot? If you're gonna write interracial stories about people in another country then at least do your damn research you ignorant racist jerk! This is just stupid. And for the record Adewale is a Nigerian name.

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