All Comments on 'Under Lock And Key Ch. 05'

by mmurrells

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Annoyed

I liked this story up until the point that ever became the boss. It's not even her husband and she's taking control of everything which is just wrong ex. Making him sleep on the floor or in a separate room. Something needs to change.

cellestercellesteralmost 13 years ago
ok

I liked how cool bran was. He didn't act like an ass which is awesome. I kind of hope for a little guy on guy action and a little less control from every.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
More chapters!

Do not be discouraged and keep writing!

I do agree with the posters that Gabby needs to be a more central character and be the one in control. But I think you could fix this in your next chapter.

Please give us more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Next chapter?

When is the next chapter coming out?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
too far

i liked it up until the wife was fucking the other guy and ignoring the husband

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Sick

Another gay writer... What kinda of sick bitches would get off on that?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Soooo done.

Cut if off, kick them out. All done. No one would put up with the sexual assault and battery they were dishing out. Any problems? Call the cops and send them to jail where they belong.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Really bad

I mean less than a 1.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Mr Load showed up

And delivered us this pile of cow dung. Can believe I wasted time reading this

Beaty84BeastBeaty84Beastalmost 6 years ago
Definitely a taste of Hot

My girlfriend and I are exploring each others kinks much as the characters in the story. Not sure if we could ever go as far as these three, though!

johsunjohsunover 5 years ago
the series started good

but went south when his wife, Gabby, started fucking another guy, and kicked him out of the marriage bed.

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