by mmurrells
I liked this story up until the point that ever became the boss. It's not even her husband and she's taking control of everything which is just wrong ex. Making him sleep on the floor or in a separate room. Something needs to change.
I liked how cool bran was. He didn't act like an ass which is awesome. I kind of hope for a little guy on guy action and a little less control from every.
Do not be discouraged and keep writing!
I do agree with the posters that Gabby needs to be a more central character and be the one in control. But I think you could fix this in your next chapter.
Please give us more.
i liked it up until the wife was fucking the other guy and ignoring the husband
Another gay writer... What kinda of sick bitches would get off on that?
Cut if off, kick them out. All done. No one would put up with the sexual assault and battery they were dishing out. Any problems? Call the cops and send them to jail where they belong.
And delivered us this pile of cow dung. Can believe I wasted time reading this
My girlfriend and I are exploring each others kinks much as the characters in the story. Not sure if we could ever go as far as these three, though!
but went south when his wife, Gabby, started fucking another guy, and kicked him out of the marriage bed.