All Comments on 'Backfired'

A loving couple sorting out thier problems. Well done.

They seemed to have solved their problems in a rather unique way. Good for them and thanks for the story.

NICELY DONE,LOVED HER TAKING CHARGE. O.M.G. WHY ARE THEY BUYING ALL OF THAT PRESSURIZED DREAM WHIP..OH GOODY! CREAM PIE TOPPING.. (-: YOUR BIO INDICATES THIS IS YOUR FIRST STORY ..VERY NICE & PLEASE SUBMIT MORE OF YOUR WORKS..

But it certainly would be chewed up in a LW analysis!

Unbelievable. Straight drivel, not even the least bit erotic.

Just not the cheating in the middle. If she is woman enough to swallow yours you should be man enough to reciprocate. We read all the time about the woman licking the guy clean after sex, be a man, it is yours.

Lots of run-on sentences. Could use editing

I thought the way he ate the office girl's pussy the first time was very funny. Then being caught with the girl on his desk in his office by his wife was also very funny.

I can see both of those scenes in my mind.

Well done and thanks for the read.

She had every right to leave his cheating ass but she went with the flow.

Then she gave him a creampie.

Now we know.

A cuck is born.

A bit creepy how perverted they guy was but still a decent story!

The story was fantastic the imagination quotient for plausibility stretched to reasonable limits when the first encounter with the young girl at the office took place. Overall the story worked. Thanks for an amazing ride.

I enjoyed your story. Too bad he had to work on her so long to accept cunnilingus. Then to get her in a dangerously devious way. Could have been out on his ass, huh? Cheers! c29

Are you all still cleaning up each other and does she like sucking dick i do i am a woman who loves to suck dick and get pussy eat by my husband and my girlfriend yep im bi sexual and i eat pussy myself it awesome to

1C

I would love to eat another mans cum from my wife.

When his wife gives him a choice? Tell her she's welcome to leave but that he's not going anywhere. She has no legal right to kick him out of the house. If she wants to leave and file for a divorce, she can. The the rest of this was complete bullshit.

different, erotic. 5*

Enjoyable loving wife read.

That was fun, albeit a bit dangerous!

We are looking forward to reading more :)

V&S

5 stars, I love a happy ending

He's just lucky she wanted revenge instead of tossing him to the curb straight away.

5 stars.

And if the MC and wife swapped genders and Sarah was male, what would the commenters think?