All Comments on 'Bad Dreams Ch. 05'

the story is good... could you extend the chapters they are too short. you get my attention... then the chapter ends. try to make the chapters longer

more more more!!!

I like this story. More please A.S.A.P

I just got caught up on the entire series and have a few things to say. First off this story is good and really enjoyable to read. I eagerly await the next chapter, which brings me to my second thing to say. I know you said life has a way of getting in the way of your writing career, but if possible could you try and post at least once a month. Any longer than that and I personally lose track of the story.

Whatever you chose to do, I wish you luck and lots of happiness as an armature author.

Great start! Have enjoyed reading the beginning

of this continuing saga.

Well that certainly wasn't what she was expecting for their first date! I don't know if he's handling this right. I need more!

Great story! Cannot 'wait' to read more. Love your style. ^.^ Keep on writin'!

This was a good story. I wish you would add to it--it just got interesting.

damn just got rolling then poof it stops