by Shaw_Watson
When are 'First Time' authors going to stop saying the hymen is inside the vagina? it's at the entrance not half way in!
I'm sorry, for that above comment holds truth. I recently edited this story as well, I noticed my own mistake. However, I neglected to change this mistake. As I become a better writer I'm sure that my writing style will change and see some improvement. My deepest, deepest apologize.
Only a couple of questions. While Mindy was being mugged in the park, you said that she was either stabbed or cut by the muggers knife. It was never mentioned again. Also, I don't think that the teachers would place a girl and boy in the same room, as cool as that may seem. Also would they be allowed to roam outside in central Parks by themselves at night? I think not.
Cute story though. I wonder how many loving LT relationships have started out by the couple disliking eachother.