All Comments on 'Student Abroad'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

When are 'First Time' authors going to stop saying the hymen is inside the vagina? it's at the entrance not half way in!

Shaw_WatsonShaw_Watsonalmost 13 years agoAuthor
My Apologise

I'm sorry, for that above comment holds truth. I recently edited this story as well, I noticed my own mistake. However, I neglected to change this mistake. As I become a better writer I'm sure that my writing style will change and see some improvement. My deepest, deepest apologize.

Shaw_WatsonShaw_Watsonalmost 13 years agoAuthor
Apologise *edited*

I changed the problem, enjoy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Beautiful story

Only a couple of questions. While Mindy was being mugged in the park, you said that she was either stabbed or cut by the muggers knife. It was never mentioned again. Also, I don't think that the teachers would place a girl and boy in the same room, as cool as that may seem. Also would they be allowed to roam outside in central Parks by themselves at night? I think not.

Cute story though. I wonder how many loving LT relationships have started out by the couple disliking eachother.

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