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A Confusing Love Ch. 01

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by mariasmd06/11/11

too short.

I feel like i learned nothing new in this very brief chapter. on the other hand, i appreciate you updating so soon.

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by pmpkty06/11/11

it was ok

It wasn't enough to make me want to come back and read more. I think it would have been a nice cliff hanger if we knew more about them. I know that he's apparently sorry for something he said and she kicked him out after oral, and she owns a company. That unfortunately could be any other story out there. You need more

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by BigJohn60106/11/11

Not even long enough for a flash story...

I am not sure about any of the characters or their motivations. Needed more information. Too short.

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by honeybree06/12/11

Interesting but way to short...

It is kind of hard getting into the story, because this is sort of a teaser not really a full chapter. I' am still interested in the story but felt rip off here...lol. But since you are new here, I think you should know that even though readers like authors who update frequently, most don't mind waiting for a great chapter so don't feel the need to pressure yourself to update quickly. Most would rather wait for a great developed chapter than short burst of in between because you would loose a lot of readers that way. But still interested and can't wait to see where this goes.

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by unfairplay06/12/11

You don't always have to rush an update out, although I do understand what you're saying. It would be nice to get a better glimpse inside the characters, especially the female lead. Decent enough story though.

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by Elmo53306/27/11

Short on Everything

The chapters are short, and so is my interest. Both chapters so far have said almost the same thing. I left them both not sure of what was going on or where they were headed, and not caring. It's a good start but it needs something to really draw you in. I really loved your other stories like Seven Days and Damn Dress.

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by Elmo53306/27/11

Oops!

Sorry about the comment about "your" other stories.
I mixed you up with another author. Sorry!!!

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by prettylittleliar07/09/11

love it

Don't even trip about Seven Days! Its one of my all time favorites. Like literally I go back and read it like every 3 to 5 months, I love it that
much. I just love Soular period. But you are working this story. I love it already and can totally tell that it will be one of those stories that I keep on retainer and come back and read over and over just like "Seven Days" Please continue o write. DO NOT STOP THIS SORY or I will Die. PLease. I need more!!!! Update!

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by LoveBird192907/09/11

Yes, the chapters are short, but they're the length you want them to be, so I'm not mad. Hope with the next update you'll give us some back story so we can better understand how your characters came to be where they are now & their motivations for their actions. Sounds like there's an interesting story to be told regarding the night Dam called Victoria his "fuck buddy".

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by Alpha_Marm10/20/11

Please consider this.............

These two are titans of sorts, but she needs to follow her gut. It is very obvious she loves him, but he is unwilling to acknowledge her personal power. It ain't always about Miss Kitty and Mr.Johnson. Recognize!!!
Men need to understand we women
CAN and WILL walk away as circumstances dictate....dig it?!?!?!?

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by urbanlove32101/19/12

Please :(

oh please please please continue :) im loving this story so far hope that soon you would post up the rest of the story.

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by fluer02/12/12

More Please

I've just discover this story and I'm in agony. You've gotta update this story.

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by ScorpMoon12/16/12

Outstanding Twist

This story has so much potential. I hope you continue it. You created some intrigue as well as weaving an exciting pairing between Victoria and Damian.

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by KittyOh4812/27/12

You have me hooked!

When is the next update? Because I am hooked and need to know what will happen next in the lives of Damien and Victoria.

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by AMHJ8912/12/13

Please come back and finish

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