All Comments on 'Marked'

Loved it! Can't wait for the update :)

Maybe? I know Alora was marked but why? Who gave the order for her to be taken? Why was it so important if Cale was unable to complete his orders that Jason Jania be there to complete the task? Cale using a condom has me confused, And Alora wasn't a virgin.I have so many question that I hope you will answer in upcoming chapters of "Marked"

This is so good!!! Please post more!!!

aaargh so many open questions. this is annoying, not knowing just a little bit more. hope you'll give us the next chapter soon.

you should make a sequel

I hope you continue with this story!

Nothing more to say...Just WOW! Waiting for the next . Soon please :)

I don't get it! What was he ordered to do?

It is frustrating to finally find a story that hooks you and then never continues... This is a breathtaking first chapter and it definitely has the potential to become an amazing story. Please, i'm sure many readers have asked you to continue your story...

MORE!!

"Your" for "you're". Also referred to Cale as "you" in mid-scene...way to break the immersion. Read it before you submit it.

Still a great read. Takes me back to my high school days 😂