All Comments on 'His Teen Consort Ch. 01'

I really liked the story. I hope it continues. I found a few possibly minor inconsistencies that were a bit distracting. For example, if the wife is nearly paralyzed, it would be difficult for her to leave the house under any circumstance, let alone "shut the door behind her". It seemed odd for her character. The next was that the couple took the girl in and then at the end, Jack returned her to the boarding house where she lived. Just a few small things. Overall, good job, though.

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