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by live4passion

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twelveoone almost 13 years ago

I voted

three,

because it is a joke

simply__me almost 13 years ago

live4passion

I think what twelve is getting at is this doesn't provoke an image. You have the thoughts, but what image does this convey? I am no student of haiku, but I know that it is supposed to describe an image with an cut at the end. Anyone correct who may know otherwise.

Anyway, I hope she gets there.