All Comments on 'Hard Day in a Schoolgirl's Life Ch. 02'

by flameinacorset

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
a little rough...but getting better....

Yes, it has been 2 hard day's in your schoolgirl's life...and day 2 isn't over yet....

Let's see how much further you can push this horny little schoolgirl??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

please chapter 3! great story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Five Stars: Keep Her Coming!

You're really starting to build up speed now. Things are VERY well developed on the Degradation side of your stories, but I think that there's still room for a wee bit more detail during the sex acts themselves. You never want to suffer from "premature conclusion", eh?

If you carry on with this series [Please!], I really like the idea of passing 'our girl' around to various different members of the school (as opposed to just keeping her returning to the principal's office every single chapter).

cutelilhottiecutelilhottiealmost 4 years ago

to bad you stopped writing

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