All Comments on 'Memento Mori'

Now what I like (as if anyone cares) is what you did with the last line. It ends on an element of triteness, but falls out of rhyme (calling attention to it) and plays well against the first stanza (reprising Hallmark cards), and the sound of the first line. Risky, in the fact it may be missed.

I saw no one mentioned it yet in NPR. I will if no one else does. I am hoping...

At last after wading through the rest I finally find someone who can write poetry