All Comments on 'baby please'

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Corpse_riderCorpse_rideralmost 13 years ago
pleased to read

Evocative erotica.

Just the right length for the piece, I think. Strong rhythm, the repetition of words/phrases added urgency and built tension.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
RIDE CAPTAIN GIRL RIDE

on the dome of our ship, TK U MLJ LV NV

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