All Comments on 'Beloved Ch. 05'

This is an awesome story. I just wish the updates were closer together. I also understand that life sometimes gets in the way.

good story ...but chapters are too short....

very good.dont leave it too long in between,because we forget about what has happened in the story and have to read most of the other stories to catch up.

But I agree the chapter was way to short and a cliffhanger, how could you....LOL

Thank you for writing this. It is wonderful! More please!!

Please, I beg you. Don't leave us on a cliffhanger like that for ages!

I hope you will continue with your story. Please don't be like other writers by starting a story with wonderful characters and then not finishing. Your style of writing and character development is addicting, leaving me wanting more.