the best from you i've read, inasmuch as it's stripped of any excess, it engages from the off, it's clear clean imagery and intelligent point-making. i really like this one a lot.
This is smart. It elicits a reaction and makes me examine why I come to believe the things I believe. The conversational tone of it is also very effective.
Excellent! worth wading through the dross to find this nugget ... a well deserved 5
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and still do not "get it". So, are you fat or not? Is that the point? confusion?
Maybe this just isn't my style, vague and self deprecating. Keep writing, you will improve :)
I read it, and I think I get it. No, she's not fat, and no, she's not thin.
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