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with dark notes of humour/bitterness:

time to move the agenda along

"Ooh Baby Baby, you feel so big"

a pig, a big one

painted on the wall

No wait! Bull

that's it, a bull

in some prehistoric cave

Harry needs to lose some weight

this leaves me feeling for the gap between the two involved; of how making love has faded to something so ... dishonest. it's cleverly written and leaves its imprint. part of me feels the last line is overkill, but the rest of me sees him reaching for the remote just as soon as he's shuddered his way into release.

Over here it's called 'Lie back and think of England'!