All Comments on 'Consummating the Marriage'

I guess the 003 is either your age or maturity level. This POC would even make JPB blush in shame

cracked me up! Lol :) i have to agree though. I don't understand why you put this story in this particular category.

and the number is 00003-can't ya count? I liked this little vignette because it almost justified the cheating but LW should have been the category!

The guy definitely could have shown more reluctance to cheat, especially if you are putting it in this category. He's supposed to be devoted to his bride but cheats at the drop of a hat. Why not just say he's a bastard and put in another category?

A bit of a rush job and Wannebeboytoy has written a much better version of the story. That said you do show potential.

Continue the story.I want to know what happened in the honeymoon.

When is the honeymoon chapter coming?

This story is written by a man who truly dislikes women. As I have gotten older I realize this is a thing. I have always clenched my teeth when a man goes off about his EX. It always means the same thing... he is still in love with her, and One day , if you are REAL lucky, he will talk about you the same way. The story is obviously written by a man, as no woman would mock another 's pubic hair. It is beyond juvenile. It is as if you/he are stuck, sexually speaking , at a Boy Scout Camp level of Love and intimacy. I feel sad for the woman who married you