All Comments on 'What's in a Name? Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

please continue

lili82lili82almost 13 years ago
hm...

a little weird for my tastes, but you've pulled me in. can't wait for the next post!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Brutal

WOW!Maybe you should put a disclaimer at the beginning of your story regarding the violence. Your writing is good I"ll continue and see where it leads

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
um. maybe more reluctance/non consent?

Just saying...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good job

i like it so far. ill keep reading.

kiwiplumkiwiplumover 12 years ago
huh?

He traced a "roster" with his knife? What's that?

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
Is she Seraphim?

Intrigued.......is she part of the angelic hierarchy?

She sounds powerful as hell!!! Love that part since that pig was going to mess her up. I feel like she messed him up...yum!!

Reading onward.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Please do not read...

This writer takes to to the zenith of a very good story...and promptly leaves you there. It is an excellent UNFINISHED story...Please do not read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Don't read unless you want an unfinished story.

3 years... 3 years I've been waiting. This author has left us completely hanging. It's such a disappointment.

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