All Comments on 'Taking Mom'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Could you write the prequel story aswell?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hell yeah - more!

Dude, make her pay, and pay, and pay. Make her your cum slut. Hell, even make her do chubby assed Becky and have Becky do Rhonda's pussy and ass with a strap on. Like I said, make her pay. For that matter, make her do Dad's new girlfriend. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Juvenile

Childish projections of rape are not erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good start

Nothing wrong with taking step-moms, especially if hubby's cheating. She should be glad it was her step-son, and not some total stranger. Now she won't have to go outside the house for sex. One thing though, you need to check your spelling, or have someone read over before submitting.several mistakes, but overall a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice start

I hope you have more and do your girlfriend and together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
J...P...C...

JUST PLAIN CRAP...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
How old are you ?

Lern to spell check

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
finally

most of the stories in this catagory are more 'love at first fuck' stories. this is a proper rape fanasty using sex as a weapon to dominate some one. it's about power the sex is just icing. that being said your main character is an ass and i wish him ill

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
your handle should be storycrapper not storycrafter

In my opinion very immature writing and no story background or buildup whatsoever. Perhaps with time you will be a better story crafter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Next step

Since dad already has a girlfriend make mommy Josh's slut/slave.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Repulsive

I bet you torture animals too. Get some psychiatric help.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Rape

Most rape stories are not about sex....but power of control over someone...and anger..it doesnt matter if it is a stranger or a family member... a good incest story is the conflict of having sex with someone you love but the taboo of it being a family member...your story is straight up power and control over someone...not any love and no conflict...so rightly you just write control power sex....boring

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Morons

It is a non-consent story, what the hell did you expect? Non-Consent = Power and Control. It is a fantasy about domination sex with an older woman. I seriously doubt anyone would actually do this (including the author).

If you want to read a different type of story, don't select the non-consent section.

If you all think you can write a better story, please do so.

leathercatsuitgirlleathercatsuitgirlover 11 years ago
Beautiful

thankyou for such a deliciously gorgeous and beautiful story

Sarah, London England

leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great story. Mom enjoys it, doesn't she?

Continue. I can tell you have a plan. I think she does too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Should Not Be Continued.

Too ugly for any further comment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Like story myself I raped my aunt fucked her cunt and asshole I had her screaming to point I put kid in her 8 months later she had bot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Hope they knocked her up too especially son got fuck anytime he wanted mom should her son or sons fuck her and let them knock her up too

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Hope she got knocked up

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

He needs to get her pregnant. She will be a good fuck toy for the boy. I think she will secretly love him for it all and start to love being his little fuck piece. Please continue with this story.!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Did she ever get knockup

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I would’ve loved it, but there was so many spelling errors something to work on but other than that it was good

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