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All Comments on 'Visit of King and the Knights Ch. 01'

by jimijarmushi

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

It was a really interesting story, but the grammer was so horrible that it really distracted me from what was going on. Maybe next chapter have someone help you edit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

"electrified" really? In medieval time..... you need help with your grammar but otherwise very good story.

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