All Comments on 'I Only Have Eyes For You Ch. 03'

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bredrebredreover 12 years ago
Glad you are back

Did not expect that, very good

haitiancutiehaitiancutieover 12 years ago
Happy you continued the story

Really didn't see that coming hope Ralph doesn't mess up what they have and they never should have taken LSD hope no one gets addicted

Anyways great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Didn't expect that

From a virgin teenager to LSD induced threesome in one night? From sweet, protective and loving boyfriend to let's split roast my girlfriend? That's quite a leap, and not in a positive way. To me, the story is getting off track. It's no longer my cup of tea. I would suggest a re-write, but do what you feel is best.

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