All Comments on 'Fucking Ava'

Wonderful start please continue.

I really hope you finish this. I love it!

This story had me hot from the first sentence! I hope there will be more..

very good pls keep writing..

wow. simply amazing..

Chapter 2 would be most welcome!

Lots of stories from a gal RECEIVING her first lesbian massage. Nice to read the reverse - gal GIVING her first. You describe your feelings (physical and emotional) very well. Thank you! I just know there's more to this story and I wanna be there.

Great job building the tension in the story, totally hot.

Omg i couldnt stop cumming! It was fucking awesome lol! It just went on and on and on... A-maz-ing.... And btw chapter 2 would be awesome! I would do anything to watch that!!!!

Excellent, Chapter 2 please :o)

I'd lose your thesaurus. Pretty darn good otherwise.

OMFG this was such a hot read. I love stories about seduction and people letting go of their inhibitions. The story moved along at a nice pace and I enjoyed the build up. I agree with Anonymous (07/10/11) about the thesaurus but other than that I say a very good job on your first submission.

Elle_S

IM LONGING FOR THE RIGHT "MISS RIGHT".

THANKS FOR THE STIMULATION. KEEP WRITING.