All Comments on 'Cell Mates'

by sexy_mama_09

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

This sucks

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Not bad.

I disagree with the previous comment. Good read.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 12 years ago
You've got too many stories....

...on here to be writing overly simplified storylines with questionable pov assignations. Your member site words belie the fact that you do not "get it". This site is designed for all types of criticism to be utilized by authors to better their writing. It is incredibly arrogant of most writers here to assert that they are above critique. You certainly are no Agatha Christie so learn to accept criticism if you are serious about writing well. Otherwise put a disclaimer in front of your stories letting readers know you don't write to write well so we can avoid wasting precious time.I hope this is an improvement on the previous comments banality.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Yummy

I enjoyed it and it made me warm.

MetallicPrincessMetallicPrincessover 11 years ago
continue pppplllleeeaaassseee

please continue this. so fucking good. :)

Alana22Alana22over 10 years ago
Love it.. more?

I LOVE IT! Love it, Love it, Love it!

Are you going to continue?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good, but..

How about slower penetration, and perhaps a threesome include a busty female guard?

jenorma2012jenorma2012about 6 years ago
not bad

I just wish it was longer

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
A Hot-Sexy Story,,, Yes! 😍

Hallo Sexy_Mama_09!

Well written, hot-sexy story!.... I don't know if your writing, or planning to write a "Cell Mates, Chapter-2".... But if you do, I would very much love to read it..

5-Stars and 5-Orgasms!.... Thank-you, for sharing your lovely story!

Gay Kat.

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