All Comments on 'It Pays to Study'

On the one hand, the idea that the narrator is "ok" with fathering a kid and having no part in his life is iffy for me.

On the other hand, it was a really good short story :)

"Anonymous",

Everyone on this site knows very well that if you like the idea of bareback nonconsensual sex, that you also deepdown accept the lack of any paternal accountability for it. You're not fooling anyone -- except maybe(?) yourself -- with your attempt to sound morally upright. Don't worry yourself into writing such silly comments -- I don't think anyone's judging you. :-)

Rape is rape no matter what you title your story.

I liked the story up to the point of the unwanted pregnancy or making her pregnant. I'd like to have pulled out and come all over her face so when she woke up the next morning, she'd realize what a dirty little slut she was.

I enjoyed this fantasy story, and I hope you write more. Don't let these pseudo-moralists bother you.

You are my hero!

Great story. Keep it up. Getting her pregnant was the cherry to top a good story. Thanks.

Great impregnation story! Keep it up.

Girls who drink too much deserve everything they get. I wouldn't be surprised if her friends deliberately left the door open. I was glad she got pregnant. It made a good story even better.

More creepy than erotic.

Nice story

I didn't know that people were still reading 'non-consent' stories and still leaving stupid feedbacks like 'rape is rape, sick, or creepy'. Exactly what did you expect when YOU chose to read a story in that category?

To the author, great story, non-consent and impregnation are a win/win in my book.

It feels so good when the girls are cute and young and don't know that they might be pregnant. I normally take 2 condoms everywhere. 1 with a hole in it for the barely contious college age girls from the house parties and night clubs.The other just in case I need to say it broke.

This is my little secrete but it is such a fun thing to do after u have isolated a any young girl from her friends. U just wonder. I did that to her. She does not know!

LOVED IT!

I really enjoyed reading this......do some more.....:)

We need you to write more, Patrick!

I loved this story, you should write more like this I really got off on this.

Getting the girl pregnant is fine but no S.T.Ds. Really if she can get pregnant he can get A.I.D.S.

So he does not care that he has a beautiful little son somewhere that will not know his daddy His mother is left to raise the baby on her own, left school, no job and a baby..

WHEN ARE YOU GONNA WRITE A FOLLOWUP TO THIS?

People this is erotic fiction, so I am going to tell you what I have told people looking at my stories. If you don't like what you see don't finish reading the story and then trashing what the author has written. Anonymous female.

Some of you commenting on this submission need to get a grip and remember that this story isn't real, it's erotic fiction, dumbasses.

Something like this has happened to me on real life, of course I did not get preggers. I was pretty drunk and a guy did this to me, but I was very aware of what he was doing an just tried to pretend I was to out of it. Sometimes things happen and if you liked it then its ok. Not sure I like the prgneng part of the story, but the guys perspective is great.

RAPE

She's a perfect breeder.

Omg you're great at writing!

You seem like someone I want to know ;)

A sick one but still a read.

Why on earth, when she was so out of it, and wearing a strapless dress, did you feel her tits through the dress fabric. Would have been so easy to slip the top down off her tits and have a real good play with her gorgeous soft sexy fun bags totally naked, and then pulled the top back over them when you finished, or maybe leave them naked, so she would wonder if someone had been playing with them!! Much more sexy with naked breasts, I don't know any guy who doesn't get them naked, feeling them through the fabric is actually a turnoff, so don't do it again. Otherwise a great enjoyable story!

One of the hottest, implied but not written parts is thinking and imagining what happened the next day. Wondering if she knew she got fucked and if she knew there was sperm inside her.

Which leads to the never-to-be-answered question about the day she realized she was late. Did she bother taking an EPT or was it semi-common for her to miss a period?

At some point, she had to start wondering why she was feeling different and why she missed one, maybe even two periods.

Fucking HOT!

DEFINITELY glad he didn't pull out.

Unlike the pseudo-moralists who come to an erotic story site to read this story... let's not assume we know what happened.

MAYBE she had somebody to raise her son with.

MAYBE she finished school.

Maybe, maybe, baby in her oven from some drunk wreckless fuckin'.

haha!

Disgusting. Rzpe. Disgusting..

Unacceptable.

Asshole should have been shot. That was rape. He should tell her what he did and marry her, no good bastard!

I'm very wet thank you for writing this. Good FANTASY fuck the haters

MAY BE THE ASSHOLE THAT RAPED HER AND KNOCK HER UP. SHOULD HAVE HIS DICK AND BALLS CHOPPED OFF

I really did enjoy this story but that’s because I enjoy darker aspects of… well everything. But in all honesty, It needs that extra #noncon tag. With that tag you’d have a wider audience & less readers whining about noncon. Obviously that’s just a thought but it would probably make life a lot easier

So.....was he studying in the hallway or what?

I wonder if next he finds a dead girl to fuck.

She would just lay there as well.

B

Love it!

Just a shame he didn’t turn her over and do her ass as well.

those who think this is rape, get a life. there is nothing like fucking a girl who is passed out and knocking her up. I certainly have knocked up a few girls while at college.

No consent was given, it's rape plain and simple. you gotta be a real low life to do that to a girl.

So reading a story in the non-consent section people are complaining that she didn't give consent?

NGL, that's kind of twisted. Why would you even read erotica that you are going to find offensive?

I totally agree. This was rape. Doesn't matter if she is sleeping or completely unconscious, fuckin a person WITHOUT PERMISSION IS RAPE. Anyone who does this to a woman ought to be arrested or shot

Just imagine though in the future if this character doesn’t marry the girl his son wouldn’t know if he has any sisters in the future and with DNA technology now a days I think they would be able to find out who they dad was really quick. But heck if he doesn’t marry the woman there son could accidentally get his own half sister pregnant in the future which I get that there’s over a dozen to a billion colleges but imagine the brother and sister picking the same college and being roommates and then the father meeting the mother of the son and realizing oh crap my daughter got pregnant by her half brother

It’s under non con. Not sure what people complaining about. To the author I hope this is just fiction.

5 stars would luv this to happen to me … I want a stranger to bare fuck me and leave me pregnant x