by podga
I'm really loving how you mirror the beginning and the end of their relationship. Well done.
How many parts will this be in total?
Your writing artfully expresses the every day dynamics of relationships. I find myself getting caught up in your words and the lives of your characters. I feel like I'm sitting right on the sidelines watching their lives play out just for me. Thank you, I really appreciate you and these wonderful stories.
P.S.-There is no remedy for love....unfortunately.
I really like seeing how their relationship changes over time. It is a great idea. I'd really like to see you end each chapter in the present. That's the only thing I can tell you I'd like to see different. The rest is great.
I come back to this story once a year or so and reread it and it's as special as it always is to me.