All Comments on 'A New Twist Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Pretty good and a fun fantasy. There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes though...who's Mandy?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Yes, but

Liz likes the control, but if she still loves her husband, though she has probably lost respect for him, she should begin to feel some guilt about how she is abusing him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

You should add some cum eating to the series. Jon is allowed to cum only if he eats it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Better than the first

I shot a hot load all over myself. This story is better if read while nude and stroking

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great!

5 stars! I hope to see another chapter!! What happened at the end of the 3 month trial? Thanks for the awesome stories!

lgcelsielgcelsieabout 9 years ago

Wow! I'm looking forward to another chapter or 5!

jleniljlenilabout 8 years ago
Yes!

I loved this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Trust

This is what happens when there is no trust or love in a marriage. To introduce a third party to what should be a private, consensual act is assault and rape.

To be in such an extreme bondage position with an inebriated, inexperienced person using a 10 inch strap-on will probably cause physical harm.

No love, no consent, no safe-word, no respect just selfish sadism.

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