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AlpineskierAlpineskierover 12 years ago
no, not really

You got too wrapped up in the sex and strayed too far from the story.

ROBERTODAVOROBERTODAVOover 5 years ago
What happened to the film script?

Not only wasn't there much of a story. You forgot you were writing a film scenario. There was no mention of camera angles, close-ups, lighting, etc.,.And the sex scenes were a bit pedestrian!

Robert Davidson aka Robertodavo

Insemin8Insemin8almost 2 years ago

I am acrophobic, but OMG what a ride!

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LargoKitt concocts tales, pix, and pomes out of tails and heads, indents and bulges, drips and licks. The characters in these stories, verses, and pictures resemble the people we don't dare be. But we can wear their costumes in the free world of our imaginations.