All Comments on 'Him First'

use it

If your purpose was simply to write a story, then well done. But there is nothing erotic or tittilating about it whatsoever.

it was ok, i have those thoughts myself , husband would never do that though, can not get enough black cock

i have been trying for long time to get my wife to try black cock , she is getting close to doing i t now, i can not wait

this is possibly the worst story Ive ever read here.....I think my shoelaces have more brains than the moron who wrote this...........HEY GO BACK TO DIGGIN DITCHES LOL

The third sentence was enough for me. Who in their right mind would want a wife like this? A woman wants another man to open her cunt not her husband WTF? You are braindead and not a man of any description.

very sloppy you need an editor whatch your spelling and your grammer

you can also improve on your technique

Horrible. This is the only rating this story deserves.

what the fuck was this shit?! are you sure its FICTION or are you just claiming that? why get married if she gives her virginity to someone else to 'open' her up!

You don need a blackie any damn horny white will do it for you.The writer is a black and is a racist-sticking to the adage that all whites are not worthy lovers and husbands to white wife .why not identify yourself to all the readers and we will tell you what is worthy of you.

can the husband say annulment? do damage control, and let ex wife, do ...as she may. Not a matter of the guys are black, or other - just she's damaged goods

Nice storyline. What a perfect relationship , both are totally satisfied