All Comments on 'Back Dive Ch. 05'

Buy a dictionary. (The paper kind. Spellcheck won't do the job.)

Some mispellings and word check messed up a few but the story is getting more interesting

I didn't even notice the misspellings. (Did I spell that right?) But I did enjoy the peeking/peaking/pieking and even the swimming race fiasco/feasco/feeassko.

Don't be so critical.The author is clearly not a pro, but isn't that a part of what makes these stories so interesting?

I think the mistakes add to the "real" feeling of the writing.

An older story, so and advice will probable not be read.