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Luvine Lust Ch. 03

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by Anonymous07/12/11

not consistant

there are several bits that aren't consistant with the earlier chapters. for instance are jareth & amber persuing harvey or not? that is a major plot line that has switched in this chapter. i suggest an editor or reading the chapters through as a whole before submitting. it should help grammer, flow, spelling & consistancy.

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by Anonymous07/14/11

Great stuff

Really awesome story I enjoyed it thoroughly from start to finish

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by AmethystWolf07/16/11

Thanks

Thanks for the comments. I am working towards what happens with Amethyst, Jareth and Hervey.

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