All Comments on 'Pure Bliss Ch. 10'

I hope you finish this soon. The way it is right now it is a bunch of rambling garbage. If you don't do something with it quick I will, for the first time, quit trying and just throw the whole thing in the garbage. I have yet to give up on a Lit author, but you may prove to be my first. So hurry up and tell us this is just the story Piper is writing, and this is why she hasn't been able to finish it!!

Please, put me out of my agony!!

Please don't let this b the end

Pure stupid. Issue after issue left unaddressed. Should be

Used as fine example of trying to write a story when you do not

Have a story to start with.