All Comments on 'Becca'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
lucky

lucky charles he got rid of the pig.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 12 years ago
what's the point of this???...

....no story at all here. "Man a Pig-Woman fool for tolerating it for 20 years -she cheats-it was better- bye bye"...absolutely stupid....

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Why did she wait

20 years before leaving him??? Dumb story 1 star

Sidney43Sidney43over 12 years ago
Too harsh

The other comments that is.

Not a bad story, but I kind of doubt that she will live happily ever after with a man who invaded her home and raped her the first time they met. The author would have us believe that true love has changed him, but I find that a stretch. Still, I guess she thought the excitement was worth the risk and many women have found that to be a poor trade off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
This was pathetic

she's too old to have kids safely, not too mention the sex made my stomach churn. Thanks for ruining my hardon faster than my ex-wife ever could.

theaquarianpentheaquarianpenover 12 years ago
yuck

What did they do to you to warp your mind so badly

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Disgusting story.

Proves that Literotica will let any thing be posted (regardless of how disgusting it is). The folks who host this site certainly do NOT know the definition of "erotic." Otherwise filth like this would never surface.

chytownchytownabout 12 years ago
WOW!!!!!

No Thank You!!!!!!

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
missing words

Review and edit! this is terrible. Key words and phrases are missing! Dialogue is sparse for first half, the oddly arranged once it started!

2*

26thNC26thNCabout 4 years ago

Should have kept this one a secrete,as it is criminally bad.

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