by Tacocarnitas
This story is so over the top, but it was very entertaining. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Make the mommy pregnant with Brian's baby...then make Bethany pregnant..
TOO GOOD ...
I know you say this is the end but please more. I like the other comments like make both females pregnant and brian starts living with both of them. they work and he just has them something anything just more please.
Your time line doesn't seem to match up concerning to her cup size it was a ddd when she had the baby but a ee at 17 but you said she had the baby at 18. # just saying.
It was amazing... It has potential for more... Like does Bethany have the same condition? And he can still fuck the Busty nurse and Bethanys mom... And even bring in a younger sister to Bethany or even bring in an aunt who has same condition or problem with her son and they both can fuck all of them... Just suggestions but this story is great and it would be great if the story went on it has alot of potential...
Brian never got to gush in Bethany's mums pussy!
The receptionist never got in on the action either.
They could have both got upsized too.
Very enjoyable read anyway.
good story line, just need to pay more attention to the details, add the scenes with the Doctor getting fucked with her daughter, some anal along the way too. get them married and have all 3 living together and getting pregnant would be good too.
please could you can on writing more for this story , you have made my wife and i very horny reading it , great work, please continue to write
Never read any of your submissions before, that's definitely my loss! They're awesome, full of all my favourite themes - huge tits, hot sexy Moms who love being hard fucked by their boys and so on. I love the almost cartoon-like qualities that you introduce in your stories, brings an additional dimension to my enjoyment of your stories.
You have the art. One of the best stories I have ever read. The build up. The nurse casually jerking him off and the conversation going. Her innocent questions. Good.
This is a very clever, really fun story! It's great that the mother has such an impressive rack and lets her boy Brian enjoy it to his heart's content. It's even greater that his mommy opens up her twat to her darling baby boy, the way ALL mommies should! Incidentally, it's a fine touch that Brian keeps calling his mother "mommy"---it just underscores their relationship, the closest there is. Brian's something else, a boy with a huge prick and a pair of hot young balls to match, who's always hard, especially for his beloved mommy. Brian spreads what he's got in those big balls of his all around the place, up every twat within reach. Time for Brian to fuck babies up all those twats, starting with his own mother's. His girls'll all have dripping cunts and his boys great big pricks and constantly loaded balls.
This is such a great story. Brian is so fortunate to have a mom who will jack him off so often. It has to be a nice stress reliever for young boy with so much jizm.
I never read the other stories in this series but I will now!!! PLEASE keep writing! I am absolutely gushing into my panties!
More, More, More, must have more PLEASE!!! I don't think I'm alone when I say we need more of this story... I REALLY hope to read more soon...
Completely unrealistic, but a lot of fun. It was like Alice in Wonderland, haha. Don't stop writing, and please make another epilogue to this,
What 18yo calls his mother "Mommy"? That's the real mental problem.
Very well written! Not a "boob man", per se', but still quite enjoyable. May be next time the two "mommies" can enjoy each other, too.
grade A++ jerk off material....fantasy should always be bigger than life! well done! more please.
to the person who asked what 18 yr old calls his mom "mommy", did you not read what the writer said at the beginning-that he/she writes about incest, huge tits and COMPLETELY UNREALISTIC situations? it's fantasy shit, plain and simple!
Its a great story. Hot and immediate. Just what the doctor ordered.
To the person who asked who calls his mom "mommy"...., answer =
people who read incest stories. Simple.
Of course it was over the top, but it was great! Write more!!
Quite an imagination and humorous. Very well done with great writing.
It irks me a bit that the perspective of the story is suddenly switched from the first person perspective of the son to suddenly being in the third person. It tends to be better to keep to one voice all the way through, and there was no reason to switch voices since the third person did not give us more information.
Speaking of more, the actual sex scenes could have been given more detail. Granted the story has a decent length and does have plenty to masturbate to, but it's more based on the numbers of time the sex is had than the quality and detail of the actual sex between the characters.
Every time I read this fabulous story I cum with them. Wish there was more about cumming on their tits.
It seemed like Kurt Vonnegut tooted crank while eating his wife and she was reading Penthouse Letters aloud! apologies to Kurt for misspell.
Let's see it Taco, fantastic start so let's get to the no doubt explosive sequel already.
Thanks again for all the great feedback. No more of this story planned (tho I may revisit it in the future), but I've got a final chapter of Mommy Made for Me pending, so keep an eye out for that! It's by far the longest, most complicated chapter, so please read and vote it up!
..... outlandishly crazy, that's it's both funny and erotic at the same time... i kept wanting to stop reading because it just kept getting weirder by the paragraph but, i was so curious to know how it was going to end, i just stayed with it. i'm not a boob type person myself but, it kept bringing to mind those 3D comic women with the over-sized chest protectors. very entertaining read.
" Mommy takes me to the Dr" Excellent story of clinical coming in moms needy sperm sucking sons welcome cum. Nursing on mom is always the best. Suckling her large jutting nipples makes her feel so much love and affection. The application of the vaginal ointment facilitated the smooth entry into mothers wanton incestuous sucking sperm hole. The boy experienced the superb viselike grip of mothers cunt.
Every time I read this story, (and I read it often;) I can't help but think, "This story is absolutely fucking ridiculous". Then I come. :-D I love it. I some times read it 'anonymous' just so I can give it 5 stars again. The only thing I'd wish you'd explore is more with Bethenny and Brian getting into the sibling bit with Ms. Pepper as Mommy.
Please write more of these kind of "absolutely fucking ridiculous" stories. ("Mommy made for me" is great too.)
First you make a point of emphasizing that the mother is not married and is to be called Ms., but you shift to calling her Mrs. Also, you seem to be mathematically challenged. Mom is 36, son is 18. Mom became pregnant at 16? Also, how did Bethany age backwards? She started off at 22, then became 19...
I read this in the wee hours of the morning when I should have been sleeping and I had to come back to it this morning just to see if it really was what I thought I'd read a few hours ago. And it was.
Now I'm thinking it might be fun to visit this world for a few hours..... Strictly as an observer, of course..... And without any liquid or pharmaceutical aids...... I won't even bring my camera......
realistic, not!!!
so outlandish it is no longer humourous.
I hope you planned this story as a comedy because it was funny as hell
If you didn't write a comedy you missed your calling
I'm sorry, but this story is totally unbelievable, the story line is weak, the characters laughable, the sheer massiveness of the tits is unrealistic, not to mention that a career woman could be that naive and turn into a brainless bimbo in 2 seconds is a boner killer.
whatever it was I had my hand on my cock the whole time wishing I could taste him and her and her. I would eat his cum from mommy while he fucked the girl then eat his cum from her as he went back to mommy or perhaps he would fuck me as I ate his cum from them. I would love to suck his cock and take his load as I whimpered like a sissy cum slut.
Totally over the top, unbelievable and impossible, like written Anime ^^ I thoroughly enjoyed it.
The best story I ever read, my favorite... Fantastic tale, they should make a movie based on this story..
Read it over and over.
So Bethany is 18, 19, and 22. And lots of others. It's a fun hot story, what makes a story great is if it is well edited with good character development.
This story is not supposed to be believable and that is how it for better or worse. It is fun to read a story where it makes no logical sense. The ages kept kept throwing me off. The dialogue was good but kind of repetitive and weak.
lordy,lordy, wow what a very hot story,husband and i enjoyd it..husband isnt a boob man,but he is a mommy boy,i am a boob lady,loved the big boobs on the ladys,please write some more..made my day, thanks again..
Brians mom and girl friend later went to work on a dairy farm and were put into the milking rotation. Farmer and all were happy happy!!!
well done..!
Not usually something i would read but the disclaimer peaked my interest and didn't not disappoint definitely outlandish and definitely entertaining
what a very hot story, husband and i read it, he's not a breast man,but he is a mommy's boy. but i love reading about big boobs like this story you should, write the next chapter, make brian's girlfriend pregnant and when the baby gets here let her breastfeed the baby and mommy.cause didn't mommy like suckling the girlfriend big nipples, well anyway please write the next chapter. thanks again...
Very entertaining story, but How old is Beth? What happen the second Dr. appointment, besides him and Beth agreeing to go out?
I've read every chapter in these stories about him and his busty mom and girlfriend, and boy do they turn me on so much. Please continue with this, I think it'd be so erotic if he got both his mom and girlfriend pregnant. You could have Brian and Bethany get married, that'd be cute! Keep it up, hope to see more of these stories.
The age of Beth is also confusing. You state she 19 and there is 4 years deference that would make him 15 and a senior.
As for her halving a baby the lady in my wife's room at the hospital had very large breast and she was breast feeding and her baby was born with teeth.
I love this outrageous story. As far-fetched as it was presented it certainly sent a lot of titillating testosterone flow through my body. Thanks for creating an interesting fantasy.
Masturbation is by definition self pleasure. Other than that, pretty good story.
It isn't an insult, I just think a 5 or 1 should be obvious to all, always and all ways.
As a carefully crafted piece of literature it's a 2, but..... it isn't even planned as literature.
As an example of fun frivolous and erotici it's definitely excellent.
A request, I prefer the monsters be at least soft and preferably demonstrate a good solid swing. An early lover demonstrated to my beginner eyes how exciting migrating mounds can be as they swing , bounce or settle differently at different times,. And with different clothing not only with no clothing. That doesn't mean others are no good, just an alternate presentation.
Oh my god!!! Multiple creampies with mom and girlfriend is the best.
I bring a naturally over endowed gal live your big breasted gals being the lead in this dtory.. I was 38 dd 22 36 all my teenage years... I think being a champion swimmer grew my breast and underlying strong muscles
I hated wearing a bra .back then they were thick white gotten. More to flatten you.
After my first baby I grew to gg. When I was lactating I was a solid In
So I loved this fun sexy big breast gal romp. Write more!
I loved ever aspect of it. Got hard many times reading it. I know I will jerk off in bed thinking of this Great Great Story.-EATANDBEMERRY
The kid is unbeliveable. "'Mommy' this and that. 'Are we fucking?". The body dimensions given make them a pair of grotesques. And the language used is entirely unerotic. It is about as stimulating as a laboratory experiment using rats.
Mmmmm...mommy’s hot huge titted body next to his girlfriends big titted body, and fucking both of their hot pussy’s. Reminds me of my own floppy titted, big nippled, hot pussy of a mom. I’m stroking my cock now remembering all of the times I saw my mommy’s naked floppers and hairy, juicy pussy / twat. Mmmmmmm
As it is she watched me make love to her Gay friends cocks many times when we went to their parties and she did let me rub my little penis on her leg as a few girls watched. She is the only one who could make me cum and she let some girls try but they never were able to get me to release like Mommy. I like the mens cocks and that made her happy.
A top notch fantasy that just kept building on itself. I look forward to reading the next two chapters. Well done!
This is the silliest sex story ever, totally juvenile. You could have just repeated "fuck, suck, titties, pussy, mommy, cum, cock, squirt" over and over for 3 pages and it would had as much appeal. I can only assume the author is under the age of 12. Stay in school, go to college, and see a therapist.
Just a complete exaggeration on every level but yet I found myself reading it all the way through. Probably the mental imagery involved in picturing these beautiful women ( esp Bethany ) . Be quite a deal to be able to come as often as this kid does . In my dreams ....and to have two willing women like these two available .
Thanks for the story and keep it going . Maybe some group therapy with other mommies and their sons ? Father’s and daughters ? All in the name of science ...
having both parties so well endowed , more time was was needed to illustrate his size
and cum load.
i love big titties! this story is fucking hot!!! i hope there will be more to cum!!!!
What a great story! Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it. It is powerfully erotic, hits all the right buttons.
Now that's my kind of fantasy. Unrealistic, yes, but that's what fantasies are. Maybe better with a sister;-)
Ridiculous storyline, tit size and cock size, but I’ll be damn if it wasn’t one of the best I’ve read. Easy to bypass what the trolls call unbelievable, just by indulging the authors’s, not to mention 60% of readers, fantasize big tits to motor boat. 5*
Some pussy eating would have made me squirt...... Right now still slowly fucking my pussy gonna read the next installment and cum thank you baby
Fantastic story. I rate this story a top 10. I wish I was the guy & all this sex was happening to me. I am into to thrusting from behind (my best position). I just wish this was me. Lucky guy.