All Comments on 'Demoted Ch. 01'

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Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptalmost 13 years ago
Shit!

Stories like this piss me off. If the asshole didn't love his wife no more, he should have divorced her. Now he will not only lose money, he will lose something more important...his masculinity. Now if he leaves, she will probably ruin him (she's probably going to do that anyway, then divorce him.)

Still, nice writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Terrible

Stories like this are just really sad. How does the guy go from being some big shot to a sissy? I wouldn't give a damn how much evidence that bitch had agaisnt me, I wouldn't just fucking sit there and take that shit. At least explain why this guy turned into a little bitch so fast.

Wiz72552Wiz72552almost 13 years ago
Wonderful

I love these stories. A true submissive had these thoughts and just had to be pushed into it. More more more.

cuckold75cuckold75over 11 years ago
wow

This is what i want with my life so far so great story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
This was just stupid.

When she laid out her rules he just laughed at her, packed and told her she'd hear from his attorney regarding the divorce. Her half? Is still only half, so what magically gives her control? Nothing! The divorce does nothing to him. It's STILL HALF. She has no control with her half. If she wants to make a mess then they both lose everything. Even if he decides to sell his half so what? He just gets another job with no more bitch Carrie attached and moves on. This whole story wasn't thought through. Just awful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
HAHAHA!

He laughed in her face and walked out. Went home and packed some things. He was at the bank first thing in the morning and took half of everything. Then we saw his attorney and filed for a divorce. They sold the Company and split it 50/50. The rest was bullshit. Even for fiction this was laughably bad. She was right. She knew nothing about plastics so there's no way she does anything but run the company into the ground if she tries. Why would he stay with her? And Jeremy sticking his cock into his mouth? That's the funniest and stupidest thing I've EVER read. He'd bring back a bloody stump and if they didn't call 911 he'd bleed to death. Of course with 911 comes the cops. Guess who goes to jail for illegal restraint, assault, battery, sexual assault, rape and spousal abuse, just to name a few of the crimes she and lover boy committed. This has to be one of the worst stories on Lit. Badly thought out drivel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Walk way, no run away.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

She has no leverage. Just walk away and laugh at them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Guys, yeah most of these sissy stories are written by idiots who don't know shit aboit business. Another best one yet is the one by Shiny Pink about Mrs. Catherine Stevens. Lol! Like the woman blackmails her because into becoming sissy by framing him as drug user. Imo that much fine but that idiot faggot added another line (maybe that made his story more convincing, idk) that he had given her power of attorney beforehand & the bank would need her signatures. So, this shit would implicate her too. Then that idiot writes that she was able to remove police from the back of that guy. If she was such a bigshot, why was she a secretary in the first place, lol! It even says that she was homeless before getting that job. How does a homeless woman muster enough power to shoo away the police sniffing drugs of all things, you need to know freaking feds for that shit but some low wage secretary had that access. What? Hahaha

I only read these stories for their horniness. They are pretty low effort & low IQ otherwise.

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