All Comments on 'Demoted Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I understand

No wonder this wimp couldn't get Carrie pregnant. He deserves everything he gets because he doesn't resist. Don't know what Carrie saw in him in the first place. She has to be a little dense to be clueless about his long affair with his secretary. What a loser Timmy is for putting up with any of this. Like a said, he deserves what he gets now.

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptalmost 13 years ago
Like I said...

Tim has lost his masculinity. Now he will be nothing more than the company whore. This is what he gets and deserves for cheating and not leaving when he had the chance.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

If it wasn't for little bitches like tim...or shall we just dispense and call her tina stories like this wouldn't be written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Utter stupidity

What guy doesn't turn around and kick the bedroom door in with one kick? God I hate stupid stories that make no sense. And post this trash in Gay Male where it belongs.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Simply awful

Poorly written drivel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This should have been called "All about Rape".

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