by midnightdeathwriter
... this story is developing well; it would be a shame not to continue with it now. 4 *s -- perhaps Part 3 might see that become 5 -- it's entirely up to you.
To be honest I liked the first chapter better, but I am intrigued to see where this story is going. I would love to see her full acquiescence of her true self and complete submission to her new Master.
This was exceptional, so far i have truly enjoyed it..
i look forward to Chapter three, and hope i won't have to wait long !!!!