The way you've built up to this point, and the realistic character portrayals, makes this story very believable. And for me at least, that makes it MUHC more erotic.
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Anonymous08/07/11
Good Story
Would have preferred if you had wrote from a male perspective though.
By building to the crossing of boundries the story seems much more realistic than most whgich makes it one of the best. Mentioning Kathy not being on birth control could take this to a dark place though...but again realistic.
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Damn... it just gets hotter and hotter
The way you've built up to this point, and the realistic character portrayals, makes this story very believable. And for me at least, that makes it MUHC more erotic.
Good Story
Would have preferred if you had wrote from a male perspective though.
Funny you suggested that, Anonymous...
Check out Chapter 4, which should go live any time now...
great series
By building to the crossing of boundries the story seems much more realistic than most whgich makes it one of the best. Mentioning Kathy not being on birth control could take this to a dark place though...but again realistic.
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