The way you've built up to this point, and the realistic character portrayals, makes this story very believable. And for me at least, that makes it MUHC more erotic.
Would have preferred if you had wrote from a male perspective though.
Check out Chapter 4, which should go live any time now...
By building to the crossing of boundries the story seems much more realistic than most whgich makes it one of the best. Mentioning Kathy not being on birth control could take this to a dark place though...but again realistic.
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