All Comments on 'Summer Storm Ch. 03'

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wdelanderwdelanderalmost 13 years ago
Damn... it just gets hotter and hotter

The way you've built up to this point, and the realistic character portrayals, makes this story very believable. And for me at least, that makes it MUHC more erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good Story

Would have preferred if you had wrote from a male perspective though.

Gary_X_NovemberGary_X_Novemberover 12 years ago
Funny you suggested that, Anonymous...

Check out Chapter 4, which should go live any time now...

jbdeepjbdeepover 12 years ago
great series

By building to the crossing of boundries the story seems much more realistic than most whgich makes it one of the best. Mentioning Kathy not being on birth control could take this to a dark place though...but again realistic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
love is great!

Hello from Greece! love is great! I like that the story is written from a woman's perspective. thats great. however, i would like to point out that i am regretful that i had a girlfriend and transmitted her genital herpes without telling her about that. it was awful. she may have problems in pregnancy. it is a life time disease. no cure exists. some people are taking drugs their whole life for that!

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