Great story babe! You're very talented! You had me locked in from the start.
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Anonymous07/27/11
Pure tease. . .
Fast, funny, clever: the deceptive lightness of touch actually masks a carefully thought-out narrative construction. As one writer / ex-editor to another. . . well done, cocodolce. Made my day!
You have a special way with words for sure....I like the 'Apology'..... the cock sucking description was hot....hope she sucks and licks more for attention....
English
*****
Interesting.
Five.
I enjoyed reading your story. :)
You're a wonderful writer.
This was so wonderful & different
Loved it!
Great story babe! You're very talented! You had me locked in from the start.
Pure tease. . .
Fast, funny, clever: the deceptive lightness of touch actually masks a carefully thought-out narrative construction. As one writer / ex-editor to another. . . well done, cocodolce. Made my day!
Nice!!
Great story!! Sure got a rise outta me!!!
HOT...I luv it
You have a special way with words for sure....I like the 'Apology'..... the cock sucking description was hot....hope she sucks and licks more for attention....
Hot story
Well written and hot to boot.
Great story and well writen. Will it be a part II
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