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Lemonade (The Apology)

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by Anonymous07/18/11

*****

Interesting.

Five.

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by NeverWinterNite07/18/11

I enjoyed reading your story. :)

You're a wonderful writer.

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by kelleigh012707/18/11

This was so wonderful & different

Loved it!

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by inthegutter07/19/11

Great story babe! You're very talented! You had me locked in from the start.

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by Anonymous07/27/11

Pure tease. . .

Fast, funny, clever: the deceptive lightness of touch actually masks a carefully thought-out narrative construction. As one writer / ex-editor to another. . . well done, cocodolce. Made my day!

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by Bamaray04/12/12

Nice!!

Great story!! Sure got a rise outta me!!!

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by klippert04/14/12

HOT...I luv it

You have a special way with words for sure....I like the 'Apology'..... the cock sucking description was hot....hope she sucks and licks more for attention....

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by lowflykiwi04/21/12

Hot story

Well written and hot to boot.

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by datnig04/21/12

Great story and well writen. Will it be a part II

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